Chapter 2 - comments & commentary

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Chapter 2 - comments & commentary

Postby ghill » Thu Feb 18, 2016 11:53 am

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Re: Chapter 2 - comments & commentary

Postby Tabs » Fri Feb 19, 2016 10:34 am

I presume Herr Junzt is the "Officer" from The Sap? Personally I like to be surprised--to read something unusual or I don't know, maybe The Sap s/be a later chapter?
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Re: Chapter 2 - comments & commentary

Postby ghill » Fri Feb 19, 2016 1:12 pm

Would you have drawn the same conclusion if I hadn't already mentioned it?
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Re: Chapter 2 - comments & commentary

Postby Tabs » Fri Feb 19, 2016 5:41 pm

Um . . . yes, if I knew they are connected stories---the German must be it!
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