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Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2024 9:55 am
by Philulhu
”He was out on the plantation, somewhere. Some of the workers brought him in, said he’d been bitten. We couldn’t do nothin’ for him. He was too far gone by then,” said Hank with a sad shake of his head.

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Fri Apr 12, 2024 5:24 am
by Bullfrog
"Well, I wish he'd made it... If only so I could have a word with him about all these tools he left me." 'Neil' remarks, looking back at his unfinished work.
"I guess I'll stick to getting my preaching from Daigle. Good man, real pious- now that I think of it, why do you suppose Brian raised such a fuss at church if he was so deep in religion? Seems real odd to me."

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2024 11:13 pm
by Philulhu
”I really don’t know,” replied Hank, ”But once he got the idea of snakes into his head, he just wasn’t the same.”

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Sat Apr 27, 2024 7:08 am
by Bullfrog
"Mind's a funny thing. It fixes on the strangest of things... It's like blinders on a horse. Your eyes fix forward, and that's that..."'Neil' remarks, although it would be more accurate to say that this is Lawrence's own thoughts on life itself. He'd worn blinders his whole life, unaware there was anything but the forward march of time towards the same quiet life his father had lived, but now they'd been torn away, and he wasn't sure what direction was the right one. If nothing else, he knew what to flee from.
"I think I'll get back to work. Last guy definitely wanted to keep me busy."

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Sat Apr 27, 2024 10:34 pm
by Philulhu
Hank left him to it and ‘Neil’ made good progress in tidying up the workshop. That proved to be both a blessing and a curse; the room certainly looked the better for it, but it was also much easier to see all the snake carvings now…

At 6.00pm, a whistle sounded from the direction of Henry Jones’ cabin and ‘Neil’ could hear the sound of voices as men started leaving the oilfields and heading back to their cabins.

What’s Lawrence doing? Heading to his bunk? Something else?

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Sun May 05, 2024 4:56 am
by Bullfrog
I think Lawrence is going to be returning to the boarding house to speak with the others.

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Thu May 09, 2024 11:26 pm
by Philulhu
Packing up and rinsing his hands under the water pump, ’Neil headed out the main gate towards town. About half way back, he heard a commotion in one of the fields adjacent to the road.

A young, dark-skinned woman woman - one of those who worked in the cotton fields - looked over the fence at him. ”Mistuh, can you help?! It’s ma brother! I think he’s bin bitten by a snake!”

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Tue May 14, 2024 5:18 am
by Bullfrog
Lawrence hesitates, staring blankly. He was an out-of-towner, as far as anybody knew- but could the truth have already escaped? Nyatanga and his agents could be anywhere, and they certainly wouldn't have forgotten the face of the man who had slain one of their sacred snakes...

Lawrence blinks, and rubs his temple. This work was getting to him, and always had been; but whether this was a trap or not, he couldn't stand to leave a possible innocent to die. He'd done it too many times already.
"Sure thing," he says, "I could see what I can do. Where's he at?"

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Tue May 14, 2024 4:50 pm
by Philulhu
”Jus’ here,” the woman replied, pointing in the direction of a nearby tree, where another woman knelt by a young man with light brown skin, who was sitting propped up against the trunk. His trousers had been torn up as far as his knee and Lawrence could see twin trickles of blood running down his calf. His skin glistened with sweat.

The woman knelt by the man was talking to him. ”Stay wit’ us, Ezekiel. Dis man’s gonna help you.”

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Sun May 19, 2024 4:50 am
by Bullfrog
"Sit still, now. Did you get a look at that snake? And more importantly, have you got a doctor in town?" Lawrence comments, kneeling down to have a look at the bite. He'd done his fair share of wound-stitching and bonesetting on the farm--sometimes on himself, no less--but there was only so much you could do about a snakebite without antivenom.

First Aid 50%: 1d100

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Sun May 19, 2024 9:19 am
by Philulhu
Lawrence cleared the blood from the wound, then stopped. The twin puncture wounds he expected to see, weren’t there! Confused, he looked up into the face of Ezekiel who grinned wolfishly, his teeth red with blood.

As Lawrence was still trying to process this, he heard sudden movement behind him and he felt himself grabbed from behind. Hot breath on his neck and a deep voice behind him said, ”Don’ stroggle, mon! Don’ make me knock you out! De boss wont to see you…”

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Sun May 19, 2024 10:12 pm
by Bullfrog
"Oh, damn you. That's a good trick..." Lawrence mutters, cursing his own generosity. He should have known better, being in enemy territory... But he wasn't dead, not yet. He could find an opportunity, still, if he could keep from panicking. If he could get this one's guard down, then put an elbow through his teeth...
"Let's talk, then- no need to make things get any worse. What's your boss's name, what does he want from me?"

Re: Ch. 16g Working for the man (Lawrence)

Posted: Sun May 19, 2024 11:23 pm
by Philulhu
”You find out real soon,” came the reply. Lawrence could feel the man behind him, the sour smell of sweat filling his nostrils.

In the distance, the sound of an automobile could be heard approaching.