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I presume Herr Junzt is the "Officer" from The Sap? Personally I like to be surprised--to read something unusual or I don't know, maybe The Sap s/be a later chapter?
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Would you have drawn the same conclusion if I hadn't already mentioned it?
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Um . . . yes, if I knew they are connected stories---the German must be it!
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