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Lt. doolittle ignores the question. Nothing is on her mind but getting into that base. She just wants to talk to the superior, that's it, no back up plans. Back up plans are not an option.

Lt. Doolittle's tone grows more stern by the second. Anger and fear are a bad combination. Her voice picks up as she implores Carmichael to go to his superior. "We need in that base. Please go get your superior!"

"Whatever way is safest is the way I want."

http://invisiblecastle.com/roller/view/1843750/ only stats improved were handgun and navigate fulcilives2003 Lt. Rebecca Doolittle (13/13 HP, San 40, indefinitely insane): Mechanical Repair (50) Submachine Gun (15) Handgun (55) + 3 58 Electrical Repair (65) Spot Hidden (65) Navigate (55) + 6 61

Doolittle got back into her car saying, "If anyone can get a hold of the survivor back at the hotel, fine. If not we wait as long as we safely can. We then drive off, I'll lead the way, and we just hope he can follow our trail."

Sure Navigating on the ground and in the air are two entirely seperate things, but still Lt. Doolittle was able to map out a route following the back roads to the south to get to the Base. "Here, this is the route we go. If we spot any areas with survivors or supplies and said areas appear to b...

Lt. Doolittle let out a small sigh of relief. At least she is away from that hell hole. Still she felt uneasy. Stopping to figure out where to go was necessary, yes, but she still felt extremely uneasy. She turned away from the group for a moment. Let them figure out where to go, they probably knew...

Lt. Doolittle , slightly upset at the way Zorie starts to break down, holds back her own tears. As she drives the car west onto I-80 she says over the radio, "We are to pull out of the motel and head west. We can meet up and figure out what to do from there once we are at a safe distance from ...

With out wasting another second Lt. doolittle speeds away from the zombies, heading north and east around the hotel.

wow, thanks for all the help. your comments are the most helpful i've had so far pertaining to my writing. after i finish the first draft of another story i'm working on i expect to go back to this one. all your comments are def going to help. thanks

Well i figured I'd start things off here. I've been writing off and on for the past year, mostly just short little things that spring from ideas that i think are pretty cool. This one I wrote for my family to enjoy. The camp in the story actually exists as do the notebooks. We go up there every year...

Lt. doolittle Doesn't even take the time to reply but instead starts driving immediately to Frank

should i post a submission as an attachment or just in the body of the message?

Lt. Doolittle looked around, saw the danger the officers were in and then considered the danger she herself was in. She wanted to help. She really did, they needed her, even if she wasn't supposed to be there, she should help. She should. But what good would it do. It would be far more helpful to g...

Lt. Doolittle Turns to see the zombie horde coming. The site of all of them so close causes her to blank out and completely forget she even has weapons. She then tosses herself over the railing of the balconey and crashes down to the parking lot below.

Lt. Doolittle doesn't need to be told twice to run. She bolts for the door while reloading her gun. She's stopped dead in her tracks at the sight of the zombies but only for a second before she heads north out onto the balcony. All the while she mutters "Not even supposed to be here. Not even ...

Lt. Doolitle checked the ammo in her gun and looked around waiting for further instruction.

OOC: so yea im back. woo.

Hey i wouldn't mind joining. Can the character be from the town or just an outsider who has contacts within.?

The gun shots ring through Cole's ear, his finger becoming all the more itchy.

Cole finally sees them and grows even more excited. His trigger finger gets jittery but knows he shouldn't fire till they are with in range.

"come on, come on, hurry up. I wanna shoot ya"